The Barbarian Writer of a Martial Arts Visual Novel Chapter 118

EP.118

Draft.

As a writer, it is quite embarrassing to show others your manuscript before it has been reviewed.

If I had to compare it, wouldn’t it be the embarrassment that a woman who always shows her face in full makeup would feel when she unintentionally shows her bare face to her boyfriend?

Of course, I’ve never had a girlfriend who always shows up in full makeup for me, so I can only imagine her reaction.

“I’ll read it.”

“Do I really need to read it?”

“Stop talking nonsense and give it to me.”

“Ugh.”

What I am writing about there is rice cake.

The embarrassment of showing the draft of Tteokhyeopji to a housemate, or even to the opposite sex, was unimaginable. Should I say that it’s like showing your housemate your menstrual cycle in the morning?

At every moment, I was filled with agonies about whether I should hand this over, but what could I do? Dang Hwa-rin asks with an expression that says that bloodshed will not occur only if I hand over the draft obediently, so I have to give it to him.

He also said that if Dang Hwa-rin visits from Dang family, he will give him a shield and also give him a certificate of martial arts.

Tang Hualin looked at the draft quite seriously and then opened his mouth.

“The study of independent study is so messed up.”

“Something.”

“With a poisonous attack, you can poison the opponent without them noticing. Still, it’s not perfect. “You can use poison attacks in open areas, but the effect depends on the wind or the location of the poison. It’s not effective if you just throw poison into the air like this.”

“Because poison must be used in a way that is unexpected. “That’s how it was written.”

The main character in crisis. The other person is smiling arrogantly. However, the protagonist suddenly smiles at his conversion and the execution song BGM begins to play.

The main character’s secret number is revealed. The other person is screaming. They’re using poison attacks to achieve this effect.

“Closed space. Short distance. If that is not the case, you should at least describe that after using poison, the surrounding situation was conducive to using poison. “I can’t tolerate this kind of clumsy poisonous attack.”

Danghwarin, do you know poisonous attack? I can’t tolerate this. He pointed out my description of a poisonous attack with an expression that said,

Hwarin this. If it had been real, I think I would have left a long, historically accurate comment.

“I’ll add a description.”

“There is also a problem with cancer technology. Why is the protagonist aiming for the bloodletting of a lustful demon?”

“Of course, you have to aim for the blood sword that dies when you hit it, right? “You also aimed for bloodletting when catching bandits.”

“That’s because they are sewers. It’s called a color demon. “An expert who is worthy of being called a fanatic will naturally stop the bloodletting when the memorization comes.”

“Then what should I do?”

“Demon blood. If I were the main character, I would aim for acupuncture points that paralyze when hit, such as Talus Hyeol, Bihyeol, and Gokjihyeol. And looking at the situation, I will aim for bloodletting where there is an opening. “If that happens, no matter how badass you are, you will have to prepare for flight or death.”

Are you referring to a fighting style in mixed martial arts where you take away the opponent’s freedom with a low kick and aim for a decisive blow? Even cancer technology is profound if it reaches the level of 4,000.

“Then, let me describe it in a way that targets demon blood instead of bloodletting.”

“good. and.”

“Is there anything else?”

“There’s more then! “What on earth is this herbal food called Jeolcho from Sacheondanga?!”

Dang Hwa-rin pointed out my secret trick with anger.

“ah! Seven deadly nights! “I made it.”

“You made it?”

“Originally, the main character must have something like a secret to be cool. I thought a lot about whether it was Seagal Fist or Seven Deadly Nights. “I think the latter is cool, after all.”

“This is an unprecedented martial art.”

Dang Hwa-rin laughed as if it was absurd to look at the dang song jeolcho that I had created.

“listen. Mancheonhwawoo is too powerful a martial art to be used by the main character. Instead of Mancheonhwawoo, Bido is thrown and the main character runs at the same speed as Bido. The moment you avoid the rain, you’ll hit it! Breaking the enemy’s neck. how is it?”

I drank poison from Sacheondangga every day. The effect was powerful. Sacheondanga was memorized. It was cowardly. Mancheonhwawoo was strong. It can’t be like this.

“If you have that level of footwork or light attack, I think you can win just by spraying poison or magic near the enemy.”

This woman has no aspirations.

“Then how about this? The main character attached a rope to the rain passage….”

“I told you that you can’t do that! “Why do you like tying a rope to that damn thing so much?”

It is said that anyone who was involved in the Joseon martial arts world could not help but have a romantic interest in martial arts. Too bad. Is there any way to utilize it?

I continued to improve the quality of my martial arts skills by providing feedback with Danghwarin.

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“And next time… Ah!”

I glanced at the draft I handed over to Dang Hwa-rin’s surprised voice. Since radish and radish appeared in the rice cake field, the next scene is obvious.

“Hwarin. “I’ll do it myself from now on.”

When the atmosphere becomes awkward, I actually become more embarrassed. I smiled calmly and held out my hand to ask her for the draft.

“I know what I know, right? “I can give you some advice.”

Was laughing backfired? Hwarin looked at my relaxed face and instantly got angry and said.

“What advice do you give me? “Just give it to me.”

“That’s it.”

Tang Hwa-lin wiggled his fingers, lowered his head, and looked at his magnificent pectoralis major muscle.

“huh?”

“You do it with your heart. My skin chafes a little. “I think you need some lubricant.”

Yes what?

“Hwarin. How do you do that?”

“Do you really have to ask that?”

Hwarin glanced at the long, hard wooden bar next to the bed with an embarrassed expression and blushed.

oh my god. oh my god.

“Hwarin. From now on, I will do this part alone. “Don’t experiment with things like that.”

I want to die again. Why are you experimenting with that?

“I heard you can help too.”

“No for my human dignity.”

It’s not even for your correct gender concept.

“Ssi… I mustered up the courage to experiment.”

Dang Hwa-rin glared at me with a flushed face, as if he was dissatisfied with my declaration.

Why do you have the courage to experiment with that? Thanks for your thoughts. Thank you very much. But it doesn’t work. don’t If you read my novel, you will die of embarrassment.

Despite Dang Hwa-rin’s complaints, I declared that I would work on these parts alone from now on.

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Even if you want to make a living just by writing, you have to work during the day to make a living.

Even after coming to this world, the sorrow of being a concurrent novelist does not change.

“Hwarin. “I’ll teach you how to make coffee.”

“huh. “I will work hard.”

As word of mouth spread about the bookstore, the number of customers began to increase day by day.

The unfortunate thing was that Hwarin could not stay on the first floor as there were more people. Even though I wear cotton yarn to work, there were customers who were displeased.

Originally, I organized the books quickly when the store was not busy, but as the number of customers increased, it became increasingly difficult to do so during lunch hours.

I held the hand of Hwarin, who was looking despondent in a corner, and brought her to the counter on the second floor. If you make coffee while looking at the wall, you don’t really have to bump into customers.

If you’re like me, it’s time to make excuses and relax! I must have been stuck in a corner shouting. Besides that, why would a kid who works hard day and night try to dig a tunnel again if he’s not good at it?

I’m glad that the work is divided.

“Confucius. “Please give me an iced cafe latte.”

While I was teaching Hwarin diligently, an order came in from a customer.

“The order has arrived. Hwarin. “You know what I heard earlier, right?”

“Okay! “Just do the math.”

“Seungjil is. okay.”

I’m glad that I feel refreshed because I found something to do.

“customer. “You add ice to Cafe Latte 50 Cooper, so it becomes 55 Cooper.”

“Hmm. Here you go. But are you a lover? “Are you your wife?”

Sojeo asked me, squinting at Dang Hwa-rin, who was brewing coffee with interest.

“yes? ah! “I am a friend.”

Hwarin. Make coffee. Don’t look this way.

“Hehe. but. “That can’t be possible.”

Sojeo made direct eye contact when Danghwarin glared at him. Then, looking at Dang Hwa-rin’s face covered with cotton thread, he raised one corner of his mouth.

This is laughing at Hwarin. He’s the owner of our building. I don’t think I can leave it alone.

“Hey…ugh!”

I was about to say something when Hwarin suddenly stopped me by throwing something blunt.

what’s the matter. You can’t tolerate something like this. It’s our store. I shot him a look of protest, but Dang Hwa-rin shook his head slightly from side to side as if he was okay.

“Hehehe. Confucius. When the store closes later, maybe I and I will run a nice base in front of you…”

“Hey. “Bring some coffee.”

Danghwa-rin approached with quick steps and threw coffee in front of Sojeo in a cold voice.

“Yaaaa?”

Sojeo looked at Dang Hwa-rin with an expression of absurdity after hearing such a ridiculous sound.

“okay. hey. Because there are guests behind us. “Get out of the way.”

Dang Hwa-rin and So-je had a snowball fight with each other without backing down even an inch. Hwarin. Why are you fighting when I stopped you?

“Hmm. what. Is that how it is? On that face. “You have to know the topic.”

Soje looked at us in turn, then looked at Tang Hwa-rin with a knowing expression and smiled.

“what?”

Tang Hwa-rin looked at her with raised eyebrows at that sneer.

“Hehehe. no. Confucius, see you next time when there are no distractions.”

Sozer took the coffee without hiding his sneer and returned to his seat.

There are things like that. The truth was written mainly by people who read books, but is the service industry still a service industry?

“Hwarin. “I endured it well.”

“Hold on? “I couldn’t stand it.”

Hwarin looked up at me and smiled as if she was plotting something suspicious.

I’m anxious. I looked at Sozer, who had just returned to his seat. Sozer suddenly grabbed his stomach before he could put down his coffee and sit down.

“Why am I suddenly hungry…”

Sojeo had a hard time finding the bathroom with an expression of enduring pain.

It’s not in that direction. It’s the opposite direction.

一 Blurry!

Ah… this sound.

“I don’t know!”

That day, I learned about the poison called Chilbobun (七步糞), a poison that causes a reaction in the lower abdomen when you walk just seven steps, and Sojeo got the nickname “poop-swaddle” because he couldn’t even go to the bathroom at that age.

Daseogak lost a customer forever, but it wasn’t very sad.

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“It’s all written.”

I looked at the completed Dangjiapungyun with a grateful face.

Dangga Pungun written by me and edited by Danghwarin. When publishing this, should I write that Sacheondanga has been reviewed?

“Yunho! “I put the materials in the printing room!”

Danghwa-rin’s voice was heard from the floor below.

“wait! “I’ll take the book.”

Finally, all we have to do now is print and publish.

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